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(9933) () Oekaki by izzi-ink, total drawing time 2 : 11 : 51

izzi-ink 2008/8/26 - 13:52:47
first post here :D
i hope he (yes, HE) is up to standards.
if not, maybe move...?

c&&c is welcome, of course^^
jakusama 2008/8/28 - 21:44:59
Welcome! This looks great! I like the expression, and the background is absolutely gorgeous.

If you want some tips I would make his hair a little more dynamic. Add some soft, thin lines through it, like with the airbrush, to show how it flows. Maybe use a little more shading. Also, even in anime eyes, the part around the eye is white, not skin-colored, so you might want to not make that skin colored. Your anatomy is remarkable (I can't ever draw men) I would like to see some more dyamic shading; sharper contrasts, more wrinkles, but that's my preference. Overall, it's quite a lovely piece of work. You have a knack for smooth lines, which is quite nice.
izzi-ink 2008/8/30 - 19:24:33
thanks, jakusama^^

lol, i've been trying to practice on the hair and shading, since those are the things i feel i need to work on the most, too :)
anyway, thanks again for the kind critique^^
artanis 2008/9/11 - 18:5:43
such pretty colors :)
you have lovely shading, don't be afraid to make it darker!




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