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Today's Oekaki Highlight: A shout out to returning and faithful friends of TACo, who have graced us with some awesome drawings: senobdec, blacklight, solcress, p_b, umi-chan, ri-su, mogily, piffle, and congrats to Hall of Famer sabii!

The Theme Room's subject right now is: The Holidays. Because...aren't you happy they're coming up?


(completed) () Oekaki by diezombiedie, total drawing time 3 : 46 : 7

diezombiedie 2007/11/22 - 17:27:8
Hello! This is my first post here, so I hope it's okay to post this in this room!

So yeah, I'm Zoe (or Die if you wish!) I draw with a mouse, and I do a lot of semi-realism.

Theres a few little mistakes I need to come back and fix, but nothing major. SO besides little things, C&C is extremely welcomed. ;D
senobdec 2007/11/23 - 21:38:29
Not bad at all.
A) I rather dislike floating heads, though I do my fair share of them XD.
B) Increase the contrast in your shading, and maybe darken the skin tones (overall) a little.
C) left eye should be closer to the middle, and higher - adjust the face as well.

Nice job. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your stay here.
lorelai 2007/11/24 - 16:33:20
You are VERY amazing with the mouse! I especially love the shading and shape of her nose and mouth. It looks like you were a tad less patient with her hair. Everywhere I look it seems to me you've really got your technique together, so I want to hold off on critiquing it until i've seen more of your work, so I look forward to more!
jakusama 2007/11/24 - 23:45:46
I really like this. And I hope to see more from you. She looks so sad. Please keep drawing! I want to see more. :D
diezombiedie 2007/11/25 - 9:23:45
Okay, done enough.

Thanks for the crit and comments! I'll keep those in mind.

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