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(2681) () Oekaki by chrislagace, total drawing time 1 : 23 : 49

chrislagace 2007/6/26 - 22:53:16
this is a drawing of my girlfriend ^^ i want to improve real bad so c&c is most welcome!
embo 2007/6/27 - 0:37:52
I think this is some really great lineart and the composition is nice as well. Your proportions are spot on but I think, especially for the face, maybe you could try using more color values to convey the shapes of the nose, lip, mouth, and eye sockets. on the eyes, you want to zoom in a lot so you can get the lower lid, the eye lid, and the bone structure of the skull which juts out at the eyebrows and casts a shadow which shows the bone structure of the cheeks.

hope this helps! keep drawing; your work is gettingg cleaner and better every time.
jakusama 2007/6/27 - 6:12:10
I really like the colors on this and the expression... I think embo really hit on everything... I think I'll just re-emphasize that your pictures could go from really really cool to ungodly good if you just added more depth with the colors, pronounced the shading more... not that my artwork is a good example of it Hehe. I really like the expression though, excellent job!
lorelai 2007/6/27 - 18:24:28
lovely!!
dorothyblueeyes 2007/6/28 - 18:22:2
uh...yeah,this is cool; beautiful face and expression.Nice impressions.
golden 2007/6/29 - 5:57:43
the proportions are great. I rather like it without any deep shadows, I think. just some more details in the face, especially the eyes, would make the picture even better.
lorelai 2007/7/9 - 22:51:55
Also, is there any reason this really really really reminds me of Rinoa?




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