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(completed) () Oekaki by tarren, total drawing time 1 : 20 : 30

tarren 2005/8/30 - 13:59:44
D; help! WIP i can't put my finger on it but something is fatally wrong with the body. I wanted her to be sort of hunched in an action pose. (imagine she's like <__< kick a chair or something). D; Something's really wrong here.
bleau 2005/8/30 - 16:12:22
I think that maybe she should be more bent at the waist, and her right(my left) leg should be coming forward, instead of to the side, maybe get some foreshortening goin on. That's the only thing I see to change, but I'm not the best artist, either >.>
This is lookin really really hot, though. I can't wait to see it finished :O
p_b 2005/8/30 - 16:23:19
i think she'll look more hunched when you add the wrinkles in her belly/whatever clothing she'll be wearing.
Also shading helps define shapes ALOT. So i don't think you really need to change anything it looks fine to me just add stuff.
senobdec 2005/8/31 - 10:34:3
Her neck. If she's leaning forward and to her left then foreshorten (her head and shoulders forward, then her butt back, and then her legs foreshorten towards the viewer) think of it as a sideways wide V but more round.
tarren 2005/9/6 - 22:1:13
tarren 2005/9/7 - 15:54:23
gah. finally finished. D; I gave up on trying to get the body to look right.

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