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(155) () Oekaki by naoyo, total drawing time 1 : 28 : 16

naoyo 2004/2/28 - 18:57:36
This is for Zaruki-san from DeviantART. It's part of our art trade. :O I didn't know if this site had retouch so I had to keep working on it even though I felt soooo tired. =P Glad I'm finished it though.
C&C welcome, anatomy is not my friend as you can see >3
hanna 2004/2/28 - 21:57:30
I love the smooth lineart! Your shading's really nice, and I love the clothes and the pose! I like the *not really there but i am* background =P and plus, your siggy's really cool! :)
kodocha 2004/2/29 - 9:13:21
Wow! Nice pose! This site has retouch? Where? Well anyway this is beautiful! Are those people in the background? Cool! Nyo! *huggles*
embo 2004/2/29 - 13:24:38
lol, NO we don't have a retouch button YET. but anyways, im glad you finished this picture; it looks great!! wonderful shading and pose. :o)
coleslaw 2004/2/29 - 15:21:8
really, really pretty! i love the hair and the outfit, and also the weapons. :) for some c&c, though..

first the hair. WOW. awesome shape to it, nice shading, i like it a whole lot!!! you might try some more actual shading, but other than that it's perfect. great job!!

the face is nice, but the nose should be higher. usually, the pupil of the eye and the dip in the nose between the bridge of the nose and the forehead are in alignment. right here it looks like the eye is in the right place, but the nose is off. other than that, very nice!

the chest area is very odd. it goes almost straight from her neck to her breasts. try to draw the neck, and then the "bump" for the collar bones, and then the slope of the breasts. the arms are good, and so are the hands, and the waist is fine. good shading on the skirt, good angle on the dagger in her right hand (in the front.) however, she looks like she's walking, but would you hold the dagger like that while you walked? i should hope not, you'd stab yourself right in the leg >:) even though the angle itself doesn't make sense, though, you drew it REALLY nicely, if that's any consolation :) the shading on the clothes is fine, and the arms are good. just keep that stuff in mind and i'm sure you'll be fine. :)




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